Assignment:
- Revise your group paper according to the notes that I provided
- Work with your group to work on SECOND DRAFT
- Under heading, please indicate "Second Draft"
Discussion:
- Make sure you have read Nancy Sommer's "Revision Strategies..."
- Be ready to discuss article
- 1 page response
what happens if we wrote one last time and turned it in last week
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ReplyDeleteVanessa Ramirez
Rosita Dominguez
David Villanueva
Jesus Saenz
Karla Chavira
Methodology:
1.) case study of the differences between student writers and experienced writers.
a) Type of essays. expressive, explanatory and persuasive.
b) writing experience
2) Grading SAT paper.
a) the essays were analyzed by counting and categorizing the changes made.
3) Revisions of essays.
a) deletion, substitution, addition and reordering.
Group 4
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faithe
javi
grabiel
leo
cristal
1) the different ways of rewriting and revising
2)methods to revise and reconstruct their essay
3)communication the parts of the process of discovering meaning altogether.
4)Experience writers seek meaning in there writing, make changes on all levels and use all operations, Elaborate on their writing
5) the two ways of revision, holistic perspective and the perception that revision is a recursive process.
6) recursive process a process of different agenda for each cycles. Primarily directed towards narrowing the topic and delimiting their ideas and focusing upon stylistic concerns to form a argument.